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ReiAyanami
Post subject: SMS Fürst Bismarck (1897)Posted: July 12th, 2011, 12:10 am
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Well, here we are, my first foreign ship. Might as well do more Kaiserliche Marine pre dreadnoughts.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SMS_F%C3%B ... %281897%29
I could not find a template to fit it well, this was the smallest one height wise to fit it. Not 100% finished yet, but if I get started I can't but a ship down...The raised guns are not really a permament feature and can go easily, but I thought it is a nice touch, since many pre dreadnoughts had single gun turrets instead of 2 and it may need clearing up. But anyway.
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HMS Sophia
Post subject: Re: SMS Fürst Bismarck (1897)Posted: July 12th, 2011, 12:15 am
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Ouch, that is a painful colour scheme...

Anyway, there are a couple of small guns (one fore, on aft) that have no black outline on their barrels. Otherwise it looks good.


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ReiAyanami
Post subject: Re: SMS Fürst Bismarck (1897)Posted: July 12th, 2011, 12:37 am
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As if I am responsible for the color scheme... :roll: :roll: :roll: The guns are like that cause they are thin and they are painted white. When I find a better why to draw 2 line thick barrels white I'll remove the outline which I added.


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HMS Sophia
Post subject: Re: SMS Fürst Bismarck (1897)Posted: July 12th, 2011, 1:02 am
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I wasn't blaming you just commenting, jeez :P

I think they look better with the outline.


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Post subject: Re: SMS Fürst Bismarck (1897)Posted: July 12th, 2011, 1:24 am
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A very nice piece of artwork,as to the colour scheme,it makes a nice change from battleship grey.


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ReiAyanami
Post subject: Re: SMS Fürst Bismarck (1897)Posted: July 12th, 2011, 1:37 am
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Thanks Bombhead. Since it served mostly in the far east, the "tropical" scheme was what she was associated with.


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TimothyC
Post subject: Re: SMS Fürst Bismarck (1897)Posted: July 12th, 2011, 2:33 am
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Guns all at Zero elevation and trained fore-and-aft unless physically not able to be in that position.

Otherwise she looks good.

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Post subject: Re: SMS Fürst Bismarck (1897)Posted: July 12th, 2011, 7:30 am
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Nice

I adjoin Timothy, the guns need to be leveled to 0 angle
also, I spotted that you leave too much space between the shipname and credit (you did that on some other drawing as well) try to squeeze it in way others have done.

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