Hmmm...the only things I can see right now are the font-size, which is non-SB, and the fact that you've probably misunderstood her secondary armament. She carried sixteen (16) 6" guns, not a mere 10 as you have depicted. So, the foremost casemated gun need to be changed as well as the two casemated dittos above the focs'le deck guns. They all look like being, say 3"-guns right now.
_________________ My Avatar:Петр Алексеевич Безобразов (Petr Alekseevich Bezobrazov), Вице-адмирал , царская ВМФ России(1845-1906) - I sign my drawings as Ari Saarinen