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didibii
Post subject: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 4:10 pm
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Well im finally done with this ship and thanks to acelanceloet for giveing me the pictures i needed.
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As you can see i messed up on where the brg operator is, any edvice how i can fix it or get it better?
The bottom of this ship is black but i had to make it red becoues i couldt draw it like that.
The ship's fences where side ways so i drew the fenece side ways so try looking carefully to understand.
So any comments about the ship and my mistakes?
Hey is the name i put right?

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Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 4:59 pm
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Was the ship already built?

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didibii
Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 5:03 pm
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It's not build yet its still a program.
So what do you think about it? Is it good? Any mistakes?

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klagldsf
Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 5:06 pm
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Then it gets bumped to never-built for now.


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didibii
Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 5:13 pm
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ok so ill just post the same thing in never-build

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Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 5:30 pm
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No you PM Colo a request to move the topic <_<


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didibii
Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 5:56 pm
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Ok i did, anyway do i have any mistakes?

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Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 6:12 pm
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any mistakes?
weren't you supposed to ask: "have I done anything rigth?" to wich the answer sadly is "hardly"

Perhaps taking some other established shipbucket drawings under closer look and see how they are done and how not.

Also, Ougtha be doing that rigth away or else I have to consider wheter your presense here is just spamming

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acelanceloet
Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 6:21 pm
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well it looks ok, but definitely not finished. there are some parts you haven't drawn yet (you can see the original drawing through it) also, this is only the beginning of drawing. you have to refine it (and please redo the bridge, look to the dutch jss for example how this should be done) I know, from the 3d model it looks finished, but now you have to details it, as you think it should be done. for example the flags, liferafts and doors. to do that, you have to do a lot of research..... but you will have to do that for every ship. if you do that, I think most guys on sb would be glad to help if needed ;)

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Post subject: Re: Canadian JSS shipPosted: August 13th, 2010, 7:11 pm
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The first ship is in build. Expected tobe in service with the dutch jss by 2014. And the second one year later. A 3rd in option . They will replace the replenish ships of todays canadian replenish ships.

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