I agree with Thiel, she looks a bit bare boned right now.
You could add stuff like the mooring gear, handrails, liferafts, flaglines, stairs, etc.
in addition, I think there are some overhanging deck parts that I expect to have some supporting structure (especially midships), some ammo lockers...... and I am not certain if she should have bilge keels too.
I am also not certain if the radio lines in the masts should be represented as you have done on a shipbucket drawing, those spars are horizontal I think.
I would take another look at the structure under the aft funnel, it looks differently shaped on the reference (look especially about the shape it has where it meets the rounded deck.
speaking of the rounded deck, bonus points for you if you can represent that shape on a shipbucket drawing! (you tried something on the stern which I am not certain about if it is correct, it looks like an overhang there now)
Don't misunderstand me, this is great work, I just do not consider it finished