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The idea of a ship being "constructed" in such an elaborate manner is...extremely intriguing, and shows a lot of forward thinking in terms of "engineering" a ship from a Shipbucket drawing.

That said, a few thoughts:

1.) I like the first version better with the mast - that said, aside from looking even more like a brain tumor than the setup of Fridwhatever Norweiganship, it looks incredibly unstable. Why not just redraw that?

2.) I feel having two OTO 76s placed the way you have them makes it rather redundant. The ROF of that gun means that you only need one per arc to engage sea and air/seaskimming targets.

shall make a second version. but thanks for the name idea! HNoMS "BRAIN TUMOR"
"installing cat!" Yes fully agree with that.

looks better now. I would like to see some more directors though (maybe next to each other) and also, what are you planning with the dock? the way you have your weapons on the stern now, will take all space where your dock should be.

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The dock will come in the second version of the ship.

Yeah, it's the most well-designed ship you've shown so far and the first one to show real thought in design. Though I would make a flush stern at this point, it will also give you more space for your well dock.

Your current rudder arrangement won't allow a floodable dock.

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Even if you're diesel, you have way way too little stack and uptake. And the phased array faces should absolutely be at 45deg to the centerline. Neither will the 76/62 or VLS. I assume at this point that he's got a narrow RHIB bay on either side, which might work.

Oh, and yes, your funnel arrangement is weird beyond reasonable comprehension.