|Yasutomi wrote: *||September 19th, 2018, 8:35 am|
Congratulations to BB1987 and the other entrants and many thanks to the judges for the feedback. Speaking of which...I wonder if I could trouble the latter with a few questions, in an effort to improve my efforts.
1. It seems I've been working to an outdated style. Portholes are now 1-3-1 rather than the old 2-4-4-2, correct? And are there any other major stylistic issues I fell foul of?
2. Shigure: you disliked my green hull...was it the concept, or the shade I used?
Sorry to be bugging you guys for more, but understanding where I'm going wrong is really useful to me!
I got the vibe of a modern day civilian ship, rather than a warship. The color doesn't suite its role imho