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Yqueleden
Post subject: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: November 28th, 2017, 8:38 pm
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It's my first drawing here. This is the gunboat-minelayer Júpiter of the Spanish Navy. Launched in 1935, commissioned in 1937, updated in 1958 and decommissioned in 1974.

Drawing inspired in https://www.pinterest.es/pin/792422496907262666/

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CaptainPaulov
Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minrlayer JupiterPosted: November 28th, 2017, 9:11 pm
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Yqueleden wrote: *
Is my first drawing here. This is the gunboat-minelayer Júpiter of the Spanish Navy. Launched in 1935, commissioned in 1937, updated in 1958 and decommissioned in 1974.

Drawing inspired in https://www.pinterest.es/pin/792422496907262666/

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Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: November 29th, 2017, 10:30 am
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Look for some examples and do some shading for the flare of the bow, also there are some double pixels at the stern.

I'm not familiar with that class of vessel, but look at the details that were present on the actual vessel that weren't in the original drawing.

I'd also try and give credit to the original artist if possible.


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Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: November 29th, 2017, 3:57 pm
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Hi Yqueleden

Apart from anything that could be said about drawing style - the original had a length of 96 meters pp / 100 meters overall.
Yours seems to be something between 130 and 140 meters.

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Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: November 29th, 2017, 4:18 pm
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Welcome to the Bucket Yqueleden! Nice to have you here!


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Yqueleden
Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: November 29th, 2017, 4:31 pm
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Garlicdesign wrote: *
Hi Yqueleden

Apart from anything that could be said about drawing style - the original had a length of 96 meters pp / 100 meters overall.
Yours seems to be something between 130 and 140 meters.

Greetings
GD
It's true, I'm sorry. Then I'll draw it again.

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Yqueleden
Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: December 5th, 2017, 6:57 pm
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Sorry for my poor English.

I have corrected the errors (scale, double pixels, etc.) of the previous drawing and I have modified another details. The ship is presented as was in 1955 during an instructional cruise.

The drawing is original. Although is based on other drawings (and many photographs) is for reference only, is not a modification.

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Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: December 7th, 2017, 8:56 am
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Looks much better at the correct scale, I'd say its good for a first drawing. All the basics of SB art are there, you will find that as you draw more your drawing style will become more refined.

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Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: December 9th, 2017, 12:36 am
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Looks fine! Well done!


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Yqueleden
Post subject: Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer JupiterPosted: December 9th, 2017, 3:31 pm
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Thanks!

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