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Again i explain it's not possible on the sandown because it's a very small vessel.
But if i'll draw somthing bigger i'll have no problem showing you.

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well, I will post an minesweeper tonight or tomorrow with exactly that level of detail.

but what I was saying, on your sandown I miss entire stairs, lights and mooring gear, and also some equipment. because of the lack of equipment your ship looks empty, while the lack of those other parts make it look unfinished. and that is something that an minesweeper is always: cramped and stuffed with equipment.

I agree, it is harder on small vessels. that's why I said it was not possible to that extend. but some more then you have now would be very nice

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After a while that my career took most of my free time. I fixed some minor detail, like mast and windows. And i think it's done!
comments?

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much better, although I still miss some details on the bridge, and I think these new windows do not represent the real ones very well. there should be 2 small light posts at the stern, near that door.... other then that no comments anymore, good work!

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there are some "strange" points:
about the bridge: it has too many grays
about hull: why 3 lines with 3 different grays?
about waterline: it is too low with respect to the labels on the hull

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Fixed. It's shading for the line that runs all along the ship. here:
Fixed.

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I think you should draw the windows without rounded corners.

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He did.

it should be made by two black lines with a grey line between and, maybe another light shadow below

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