Really outstanding quality on your drawing.
Esepcially the shadows/shading is cool to see like this.
I know out of experience it is not easy to show the refueling hoses aswell. Most turn out to be a big blob. But you did it neatly! Great job
I just have a few things to add since i followed this project out of interest and have some pictures to add some detail to her.
For the refuel hoses i would change the colours of their hinches to Red/Green and Yellow.
These colours indicate the numbers of their location and how far they are out.
I serve on the Karel Doorman JSS, served on the Amsterdam AOR and refueled quite a lot while serving on frigates. Every AOR in navies have them.
Above her screw she has a weird shape? Might be good to add to your drawing
Your bulbous bow seems to be on spot now, this is just to confirm it after rainmakers supporting critics.
Forward tower for AOR seems have a wider gap and thinner structure than you have now.
This is from her construction and i do not know if it changed. But between the rhib locations it seems its one open gap, not a small one with a door.
Fryssian AU with Lt.Maverick 114
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Embarked on: HNLMS Karel Doorman A833
To do list:
-Karel Doorman R81 top and front view
-Karel Doorman Class variants (Chile,Belgium,Portugal)
-Jacob van Heemskerck Class (90% done)
-Kortenaer Class (touch up for current standards)
-Sachsen Class Frigates (10% done)
-Johan De Witt L801 (updating to modern standard)