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Rodondo
Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 29th, 2011, 12:28 am
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Okay I would say finished for the Above WL hull(might do the lower hull later) any problems?
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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 29th, 2011, 12:53 am
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Looks fine overall though there are a few things that need more attention:
  • double-pixel lines like on the masts should be avoided
  • standard railings should be used (you can find them here)
  • text should be 14px for the title and 10px for the credits (10.5 and 7.5 font size if you're using Paint) and no anti-aliasing
  • there is very light gray haze all around the drawing that needs to be removed

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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 29th, 2011, 1:08 am
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Ok will do then, thanks!

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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 31st, 2011, 10:54 pm
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Here is the "finished version" with all the amendments made that Whyme suggested (oh and the flag is not the Australian flag, it is the 1870 Victorian flag, hoisted before/whilst passing through the Suez canal)

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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 31st, 2011, 11:20 pm
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Much better, it looks more like a SB drawing now.
Although there's still the haze... Here is a picture to illustrate what I'm talking about:
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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 31st, 2011, 11:26 pm
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I believe this will explain it a bit better then that pic


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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 31st, 2011, 11:32 pm
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Ahh.... Missed those tiny bots then, Damn the haze! ;D

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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 31st, 2011, 11:37 pm
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Please Rodondo, do the full-hull! You've got no idea how much it'll improve and reinforce an already well executed picture! I like it very much, and am pleased to see your attention to historical correctness!

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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: May 31st, 2011, 11:53 pm
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it's not haze, it's artifacts ;)


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Post subject: Re: HMVS Cerebus, Breastwork MonitorPosted: June 1st, 2011, 12:33 am
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Here it is, free of Haze, (Klagdsf was sort of right, some of it was deck fittings) but I'll be doing the full hull (I'll dedicate it to you bezobrazov ;))

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