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Biancini1995
Post subject: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 11th, 2011, 11:59 pm
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Here my first Battle Ship:

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It's inspired on Agincourt Battleship i still need to correct the Hull and some things but tell me about the battleship.

What color is good to South Atlantic Sea?Because i want to do some camo on the BB

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Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 12th, 2011, 12:07 am
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Funnels belong in the middle of the center turrets, and the rear ones seem to be too far back. Try moving the entire upper section forward a little bit.

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Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 12th, 2011, 12:17 am
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Ok thanks but about the camo or another things?

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Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 12th, 2011, 12:50 am
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Camo would be later in life, Standard naval grey to start with then maybe play with deep blue-greys

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Biancini1995
Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 12th, 2011, 1:11 am
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Hum...i was thinking on the history can i add this new AUs in my history?

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Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 12th, 2011, 1:18 am
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If you can weave it in, then yeah, why not?

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Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 12th, 2011, 4:39 am
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In my opinion the central tower are placed too high. And they can pull together - still the same diagonal.

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Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 12th, 2011, 8:02 am
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The center of gravity is too high, this design will be at risk of capsising. You have shown the work as being yours originally, with Alvama as the current artist - you need to swap the names around. I would not reccommend camouflage for this period.


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Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 13th, 2011, 12:09 am
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Here:
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The Bridge is more small the hull has be corrected and the mid guns have adjusted

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Post subject: Re: Brazil WW1 AUPosted: October 13th, 2011, 10:12 pm
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Here my BC based on Hood design and the entire ship is made by me this time.

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