Funnels belong in the middle of the center turrets, and the rear ones seem to be too far back. Try moving the entire upper section forward a little bit.
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The center of gravity is too high, this design will be at risk of capsising. You have shown the work as being yours originally, with Alvama as the current artist - you need to swap the names around. I would not reccommend camouflage for this period.