Posts:855 Joined: August 29th, 2013, 5:58 pm
Location: Manchester, UK
Hi APDAF, one thing I would say is to look at the casemated guns on GD's Derfflinger. Can you see the way he's used contour and shading to give some shape to that battery? Looking at yours, they appear to be a little flat, which would imply some quite restrictive firing arcs.
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