Shipbucket

Yes, she much is better.

You are missing the rear portion of the planning hull, right now there is nothing behind the step, that doesn't bode well on landing...

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English Electric Canberra FD
Interwar RN Capital Ships
Super-Darings
Never-Were British Aircraft

Tried making a head on shot, but it looks really crappy IMO. Whatever, I will post it:

You said that you were basing the aircraft off of the photo of the Model HK-1 on the previous page. The fuselages on that look to be about a 1 to 1.5/1 to 2 ratio between width and height of fuselage. I'd try making it narrower.
Also, the wing thickness look to be too thick compared to the span of the wing.

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Salide - Denton - The Interrealms

I am not very active on the forums anymore, but work is still being done on my AUs. Visit the Salidan Altiverse Page on the SB Wiki for more information. All current work is being done on Google Docs.
If anyone wishes for their nations to interact with the countries of the Salidan Altiverse, please send me a PM, after which we can further discuss through email.

Yeah so I stopped trying to make a catamaran front view. Got too frustrating and odd looking. So on to other things! Still a big work in progress, need to reconstruct some parts. This is not a seaplane.





For those that are wondering what that assembly in the back is:

Looks good. My main critque is that where the shadow of the wing and the curve of the fuselage meet should be a darker shade (light blue in the RGB rather than green).

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Some little changes like you said, I think I did it right. Also made the wing stick out more.

Here is another little project for a large helicopter. I decided to let it go, as it wasn't really what I set out to make. I like the look of the Piasecki H-21, but I wanted to produce something more 'commercial' and ended up with something that is way too large. The project is called "65 decibel helicopter", as I intend to make it a commercial, urban helicopter.

My small, commercial helicopter for use in major cities. Sacrifices lift capacity and engine power by having a sound of only 70 decibels.

I felt this wasn't owed its own thread, but I have started developing a parts sheet for my AU nation, Vayiir. This is for a roughly WW2 equivalent period in my world.