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Joseph_Sheridan1945
Post subject: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 3rd, 2015, 2:10 pm
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BNS Orchestra (BNB-33) - 1984
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I tried to recreate USS Missouri with some mixtures from parts sheets. It may have some errors.


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Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 3rd, 2015, 2:20 pm
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there are so many things here, that I'll just let other people comment on this one.


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Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 3rd, 2015, 2:40 pm
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Hi Joseph,

Well, first things first, crediting - this looks like the work of either BB1987 or Colosseum, I'm afraid that I can't remember offhand which one. If that's correct, and you're using someone else's image as the source, that needs to be acknowledged.

As Heuhen's advised, there's some other bits, but that's the best start.

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Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 3rd, 2015, 2:55 pm
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apdsmith wrote:
Hi Joseph,

Well, first things first, crediting - this looks like the work of either BB1987 or Colosseum, I'm afraid that I can't remember offhand which one. If that's correct, and you're using someone else's image as the source, that needs to be acknowledged.

As Heuhen's advised, there's some other bits, but that's the best start.

Regards,
Adam
That's Colo's Iowa, no doubt about it. I did the Montana.

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Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 3rd, 2015, 2:59 pm
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First off welcome to shipbucket ! :D :D :D


Well the biggest problem will be NIH with the 4" gun IMO :lol:

(OK the stern Barbette "might" have a problem as well....)

I would ask why you want changes ? what does each of them give you and can they be done (I would make a list and work through each one)


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Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 4th, 2015, 7:39 am
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Hi, interesting start... But as the others said there are some errors ;-)
- crediting
- the picture is a .jpg and rescaled, better you uppload it as a .PNG file
- swap the rear gun with the aa-weapons so you have more space for the underhull part
- you have to place the missiles you use above the ship, just look at a clean template and you know what I mean
-put the 127mm (?) gun in the front behind your main gun

That's it for the moment, hope it will help you ;-)

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Joseph_Sheridan1945
Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 4th, 2015, 11:43 am
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Credit : Colosseum's BB-63 USS Missouri (1945)


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Joseph_Sheridan1945
Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 4th, 2015, 11:44 am
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I don't know how to draw the superstructure.


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Skyder2598
Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 4th, 2015, 3:48 pm
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What you want to draw/ change in the superstructure? (I suggest to start with a smaller ship if you want to improve your drawing skills and the use of weapons and electronics... ;-))

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Post subject: Re: BNS Orchestra Battleship (1984)Posted: August 4th, 2015, 4:46 pm
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Joseph_Sheridan1945, I think there is some confusing about crediting...... on shipbucket we credit on the drawings themselves (where you have put your own name) and not in the thread underneath it, so the drawings are still credited when not seen in this thread (for example, google image search or a repost on another website)

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