It's my first drawing here. This is the gunboat-minelayer Júpiter of the Spanish Navy. Launched in 1935, commissioned in 1937, updated in 1958 and decommissioned in 1974.
Drawing inspired in https://www.pinterest.es/pin/792422496907262666/
![[ img ]](https://i.imgur.com/u6tN7ie.png)
Thanks!
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| Author: | Yqueleden [ November 28th, 2017, 8:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter |
It's my first drawing here. This is the gunboat-minelayer Júpiter of the Spanish Navy. Launched in 1935, commissioned in 1937, updated in 1958 and decommissioned in 1974. Drawing inspired in https://www.pinterest.es/pin/792422496907262666/ Thanks! |
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| Author: | CaptainPaulov [ November 28th, 2017, 9:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minrlayer Jupiter |
Is my first drawing here. This is the gunboat-minelayer Júpiter of the Spanish Navy. Launched in 1935, commissioned in 1937, updated in 1958 and decommissioned in 1974.
Nice!
Drawing inspired in https://www.pinterest.es/pin/792422496907262666/ Thanks! |
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| Author: | matedow [ November 29th, 2017, 10:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter |
Look for some examples and do some shading for the flare of the bow, also there are some double pixels at the stern. I'm not familiar with that class of vessel, but look at the details that were present on the actual vessel that weren't in the original drawing. I'd also try and give credit to the original artist if possible. |
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| Author: | Garlicdesign [ November 29th, 2017, 3:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter |
Hi Yqueleden Apart from anything that could be said about drawing style - the original had a length of 96 meters pp / 100 meters overall. Yours seems to be something between 130 and 140 meters. Greetings GD |
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| Author: | reytuerto [ November 29th, 2017, 4:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter |
Welcome to the Bucket Yqueleden! Nice to have you here! |
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| Author: | Yqueleden [ November 29th, 2017, 4:31 pm ] | ||
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter | ||
Hi Yqueleden
It's true, I'm sorry. Then I'll draw it again.
Apart from anything that could be said about drawing style - the original had a length of 96 meters pp / 100 meters overall. Yours seems to be something between 130 and 140 meters. Greetings GD |
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| Author: | Yqueleden [ December 5th, 2017, 6:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter |
![[ img ]](https://i.imgur.com/wtBMaFy.png) Sorry for my poor English. I have corrected the errors (scale, double pixels, etc.) of the previous drawing and I have modified another details. The ship is presented as was in 1955 during an instructional cruise. The drawing is original. Although is based on other drawings (and many photographs) is for reference only, is not a modification. Greetings |
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| Author: | Hood [ December 7th, 2017, 8:56 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter |
Looks much better at the correct scale, I'd say its good for a first drawing. All the basics of SB art are there, you will find that as you draw more your drawing style will become more refined. |
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| Author: | reytuerto [ December 9th, 2017, 12:36 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter |
Looks fine! Well done! |
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| Author: | Yqueleden [ December 9th, 2017, 3:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Spain: Gunboat-minelayer Jupiter |
Thanks! |
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