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Perky50
Post subject: Re: HMS CampaniaPosted: August 17th, 2019, 7:23 pm
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Yes, I have done a fair bit of work on it ... and have managed to somehow lose my original .... oh well, back to the pixels ...


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Post subject: Re: HMS CampaniaPosted: August 17th, 2019, 11:44 pm
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Okay, here's the cleaned upstage ... still a fair bit to go, but there are refinements in place ...


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Post subject: Re: HMS CampaniaPosted: August 18th, 2019, 9:18 am
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Coming along nicely. You are getting the help you needed from the right people too.


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Post subject: Re: HMS CampaniaPosted: August 18th, 2019, 10:40 am
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I think its looking better now, its coming along very nicely.

One final nitpick, the title and credits should be anti-aliased text.

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Perky50
Post subject: Re: HMS CampaniaPosted: August 18th, 2019, 5:46 pm
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Good day, thanks again for the feed back, it helps keep me on the 'up and up', and it's great to have your expert opinions involved in this. I'll take another look at that anti-alias thingy again ... it seems to wander off on me. I may be a few days before I get much more done here, as I'm toying with the 'Harrier Carrier challenge'. However, I want to get this finished up reasonably quickly ... don't want the old girl collecting barnacles ...


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Post subject: Re: HMS CampaniaPosted: August 18th, 2019, 9:28 pm
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You are coming along nicely indeed.
Am looking forward to your completed drawing (which is almost done, now).
Apart from the obvious about the credits (fonts should be anti-aliased), I think you should also have a second look at the stern. The propellers, although look better now they seem to jut out from their "stern tubes(?)" awkwardly (for want of a better description).

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Post subject: Re: HMS CampaniaPosted: November 7th, 2019, 5:10 am
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... a bit more done ... apologies for my tardiness ...


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Post subject: Re: HMS CampaniaPosted: November 7th, 2019, 5:12 am
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