yeah, that looks much better. I am uncertain how that bridge layout will work (it is incredebly spacious, but that disturbs the line of sight of each invidual position) but that is an minor problem
watch out for the LCS-2 hull shape, 75% of the volume is aft of midship so you need to have 75% of the weight there to keep it stable. helidecks weigh not a lot, nor do hangars, so only if you have big cargo spaces aft which are always filled or ballasted, this hull shape is not suited for this ship