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Skyder2598
Post subject: Re: Generic Pre Dreadnought BattleshipPosted: June 6th, 2015, 2:27 pm
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yep, that looks better, nice work so far :-)

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Post subject: Re: Generic Pre Dreadnought BattleshipPosted: June 7th, 2015, 9:13 am
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Two things:
-note that SB style has railings with TWO horizontal lines, not one (total of 6 pixels high),
-the crane between funnels has wrong shading - light comes roughly from the upper-right corner of the drawing, and on the crane it looks like it was coming roughly from the bridge.
Anyway, nice progress.

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Post subject: Re: Generic Pre Dreadnought BattleshipPosted: June 7th, 2015, 1:46 pm
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New boat, lots more small details, a little bit of a redo on the masts and crows nests, added doors, and probably other small stuff I'm forgetting about.
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Post subject: Re: Generic Pre Dreadnought BattleshipPosted: June 8th, 2015, 2:09 pm
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Changed background to white, added details and curves to the turrets of the secondary armament, and changed small details around the crow's nests.
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Post subject: Re: Generic Pre Dreadnought BattleshipPosted: June 8th, 2015, 5:34 pm
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And now when you're already on a white background, probably you notice that the rigging stands out more (imitates a miniature ship model). You can safely use lightеr gray excluding ropes of the crane. And do not forget the SB-railings. Success! ;)



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Post subject: Re: Generic Pre Dreadnought BattleshipPosted: June 8th, 2015, 8:40 pm
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Thanks Weisman. Will make those changes.


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