Actually I liked the previous drawing more.
I have some remarks. First of all, the contour of the rear-bottom part of the fuselage, instead of being smooth curve (arc) is a zig-zag (Naixoterk can tell You a lot about how an*l I can be about that
). Secondly, I'd mark the rudder/fuselage joining by black - in FD scale it's not really a 90-degree-only like in SB (as there are actually very few real
90-degree breaks in aircraft
). Thirdly, I'd work on canopy - there is a place with double-black line of front windscreen, I'd thicken the frames of the open-able parts of canopy (even if it would mean it would have to be shown only with canopy closed) and can't say I like that smallest window behind the second seat.
I also feel there's too much black on the landing gear (places with double-black lines) - in that scale we just sometimes sacrifice accuracy to appearance.
I've uploded a new version.
hope it fix the problems.
For the window behind the second seat, i'm afraid can't sacrifice everything to appearance.....................