Firstly, I'd like to thank everyone for their critiques;
I have made some changes based on these comments; new gun barrels, smoothing out the hull, etc.
I have eliminated shading from the hull for two reasons; First, I do not have the proper references for the Neptune's
underwater hull (such as a hull contour plan) to accurately depict it. Second, I have noted a number of drawings in the archives without shading. My only alternative is to redo her as a waterline only drawing.
I have inadvertently overwrote the original drawing on page 1 with this one. Apologies.
Note to Krakatoa and Hood; Thank you for your support, but I will be returning to my AU after I get this drawing into an acceptable condition. Please realize that I lack the detailed references and time to do Real Design justice. Perhaps in the future after I gain more experience I will try Real Design again.