This ship will not work. Although you have made a plce for the funnels, and bridge you have forgotten the engines. Usualy they are behind the funnels, but here you have the third superimposed aft gun turret. This turret with its hoists and magazines don't leave much room for the engines. The situation gets worse because of all those, what appears to be twin 8" gun turrets along the sides, which also need hoists and magazines (preferably below the armour-belt line.
Armour-belt, where is it?
I suggest you'll take a closer look at similar dreadnaughts from the same time era, and ajast your drawing accordingly.
Thank you Kim for the crest
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